Building upon feedback I received from Phil, here is the Logline for my story:
"A group of celebrities are trapped in a room. A dark, mysterious figure keeps visiting them and taking one of the celebrities with him, for them never to return. Will they find out who the man is? And will they ever be able to escape?"
I feel that this incorporates a sense of tension and mystery into the plot, without giving away the twist that'll happen in the final act.
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